Evidence Examples

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The goal of the course—learn history and be able to meet basic requirements for evidence that are in the required Course Objectives.   We will do the endnotes together for this Comparison (B or A).

 

In this example of evidence:

  • Bright green means one of your phases about facts in the source about 1620s to 1660
  • Dark green means one of your phases about facts in the source about after 1660
  • Red means a factual error about what you read in the source
  • Purple means a personal opinion you had that was not in the source

 

If you proof your work as you should, you will correct the factual error and remove the personal opinion.

 

Left = page 1 with the 5Ws chart

You decide to write about Phrase2, 3, and 5 for each period

 

Right = page 2 with your comparison

You turn those phrases into complete sentences.



Place a X to the left of the edition you are using _2nd _3rd _4th.  

Place an X to the left of whether your book is a  _Paperback (soft)  or a _ Hardback (thumps if hit)

 

African people in servitude from 1620s to about 1660 compared with their
condition after 1660

 

1. African people in servitude from 1620s to about 1660 compared with their condition after 1660

Trait

African people in servitude from 1620s to about 1660

African people in servitude after 1660

Who?

Phrase1X  XXXXX  XXXX XX (p. 35)

Phrase1X  XXXXX  XXXX XX (p. 75)

What?

Phrase2XX   XXX all slaves (p. 35)

Phrase3X  XX XXX  XXX  X XX and QUOTE(p. 36)

Phrase2XX   XXX all slaves (p. 75)

Phrase3X  XX XXX  XXX  X XX (p. 75)

When?

Phrase4X  XX   XX (p. 35)

Phrase5X  XX   XX  (p. 36)

Phrase4X  XX   XX (p. 75)

Phrase5X  XX   XX YYYYY(p. 75)

Where?

Phrase6X  XX   XX (p. 35)

Phrase6X  XX   XX (p. 75)

Why?

Phrase7X  XXXXX  XXXX (p. 35)

Phrase7X  XXXXX  XXXX (p. 75)

and sometimes How?

Phrase8X  XX   XX   (p. 35)

Phrase8X  XX   XX (p. 75)

 

Intro sentence of perhaps two lines introducing the 3 issues you plan to cover for each of the 2 time periods  XXXXXXX  XXXX  XXXX  XX.

 

Phrase2XX  XXxxxxxXXxxxxxXXXX XXX xxxx XXX XxxxxxXX XXXxXXX all slaves XX XXX Phrase2XX   Xxx x xxx xxxx xxxxxx x xx x x x x x x x x  x x x x  x xXX all slaves. Brief concluding sentence on the evidence above (nothing not supported above).

 

Phrase3X  XX XX xxxX  XxxxXX  X xxXxxxxxX.  Xx xxx xxx xx xx  Xx  xxx xx xx XPhrase3X  Xxxx X XXxxxX  XXX  X XxxxX.Brief concluding sentence on the evidence above.

 

Phrase5X  XX   Xxx x xXX XX x xxxxx x xx xx xx x.. Phrase5X  XX   XX xxx xxxx xxx xxx xxx YYYYY Brief concluding sentence on the evidence above.

 

 

 

 

FYI: with a real paper, the endnotes would be at the bottom of this page.