Cover sheet
What
determines the grade for the Comparison, for the Good Habits for Evidence, and
for the 20 points
extra credit? If you did not earn it for
your work, you can earn it by being here today mindfully.
What
do you have to do to get your instructor to enter the points?
Why do I keep the papers? You are welcome to make a copy.
http://www.cjbibus.com/GS_Rubric_Plus_Feedback_Form_OC_intro_comp.pdf
Note: if you do the 5 Good Habits for Evidence on the next comparison, the letter grade can also apply to this. Example: make a B on the next comparison and your current grade becomes a B.
5 Ws Feedback – All items with an X apply to your 5Ws Chart.
I’m glad to explain each one to you.
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Items
chosen do not meet the
Requirements listed before the possible Comparison Topics. |
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Items
chosen are not from the required
pages listed for the Comparison Topic you choose. |
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What
you wrote is too long to help your brain. You are repeating, not “engaging”& the
content. |
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You
typed quotations. Again, you are repeating, not “engaging”& the content. |
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You
typed quotations. Further, you typed them incorrectly. |
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You
typed the author’s words but did not
place pairs of quotation marks (“”) as required. |
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You
did not give a specific page
number for each fact you observed. Ex: page 35, not page 35-43. |
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Other:
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&“Engaging”—common
phrase for reading actively. To learn and to be accurate with evidence, do not
just repeat.
Requirements, Page Numbers to Read, Possible Comparison Topics, Aids so you did not deceive yourself:
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For US History
http://www.cjbibus.com/1301_IntroductoryPracticeComparison_ContentREV.htm
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For US History II
http://www.cjbibus.com/1302_IntroductoryPracticeComparison_Content.htm
Endnotes Feedback – All items with an X apply to your Endnotes. I’m glad
to explain each one to you.
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You have no citation at all. |
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You have tried citation of some type, but you
have no endnotes as required for history. |
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You have cited only quotations. Citations are
required for statements. |
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A citation means everything preceding it is clearly
supported by the source on that specific
page. You have: |
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Misread or assumed,
but the source does not support your statements. See endnote # __. |
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Stated opinions or
feelings, but the source does not support your opinions. See endnote # __. |
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Based on the pattern of your endnotes and the
text, you wrote: |
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A summary of whatever
was in the pages of the source (not of the content for the topic). |
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A summary of major
issues in 1 paragraph for the earlier time period and for the later one (“C-”
to “C+”) |
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A comparison of the 2
periods, with 1 key issue in each paragraph (“B” or “A”) |
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When you have 2 (or more) facts in a row from the
same page, cite 1 time after the last
use. See #s __ __. |
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Other: |