Essay & Evidence
FAQs (Frequently Asked Questions)
Click on the
question category (TEXTBOOK) or the question itself. If you have additional
questions, just ask and I will add them here.
Do
I really need the textbook???
How
can I find all the essay questions I have to answer for each Unit essay exam?
How
can I find every possible objective question I have to answer for each Unit
objective exam?
What
is the best way to prepare for the exams?
What
is the goal of writing in this course?
What
are the three versions of the quizzes for?
What
should happen when I take the Check Your Knowledge quiz?
How
does the extra credit work with quizzes?
Why
the other versions of the quiz are only 10 minutes?
CONTENT
AND VIDEOS & ASSIGNMENTS
How
do I use Blackboard’s Assignment tool for ANY assignment?
How
do I figure out how to do the video assignment for this course?
What’s
the purpose of looking at the videos and the report I fill out?
Why
can’t I see the Unit Exams?
Why
can’t I see the Unit 1 Essay Exam? I know I did the Practice Essay (History
Changes Essay)?
READING
AND FACTUAL ACCURACY, RELIABLE SOURCES, AND NOT COPYING
Why
this emphasis on factual accuracy?
Why
this emphasis on not copying words?
Why
this emphasis on using the textbook as the reliable source?
What
is the Practice Essay (History Changes Essay)
How
does my instructor grade my written work – my essays?
What
are some tips to help me read and plan a practical essay?
How
can I avoid problems with using quotation marks and “half-copy” plagiarism?
I
click on a link but nothing happens?
I
click on a video but it asks for a password or nothing happens?
What
is the grade A_ec and B_ec and so on?
What
are the possible extra credits for quizzes and the additional benefits beyond
the extra points?
I
am a little confused on how to: submit assignments? post a discussion?
On
a mail message how to I use strike through?
The
answer to this is yes. You can buy older editions of this textbook or rent or
use it at your local library, but you need the textbook. You use it as your source of facts when you write; I use it
when I grade your evidence.
Edward
Ayers, Lewis Gould, David Oshinsky, and Jean Soderlund.
American Passages: A History of the United States. 4th edition. The ISBN
for the current 4th edition in paperback is ISBN: 9780547166469.
If you need tips on buying or
borrowing a cheap book, click here. You can use
many of the older books as long as they have 32 chapters.
Caution: You cannot use
the BRIEF, 4th edition
which has 2 fewer chapters than the
32 chapters in the other 4th editions and all prior editions of this
book.
Because
the goal of writing is to help you learn our nation’s history and the priority
is for you to be accurate, I grade your writing by comparing what you wrote
side by side with the facts in the textbook. With essays submitted, I use a
method that lets me quickly identify all of the submissions where the students
wrote on the same question.
1. I download those submissions, print them, and place
them side by side:
·
On the
left, the textbook opened to the probable section or sections students should
have used. ·
On the
right, the submissions of students’ papers on that question. |
2. I mark the paper copy, using 2-letter abbreviations for feedback
(such as NT for Not true) and grade each student’s submissions one by one.
3. If there are multiple possible questions, I then
repeat the steps above with the next question.
With the
two essays for the Unit exams, I grade one of the questions using the method
above. Unless I find problems such as factual errors in that essay, I grade the
other one without the textbook side by side with your paper—a quicker method.
The purpose of writing is to help you learn the history. With
something that people talk about in many ways, sometimes it helps to state what
is not the goal. With writing in this course,
you are not summarizing or paraphrasing the textbook. You do not,
therefore, need to repeat every fact or word in the textbook. You are also not
showing your personal writing style while stating your feelings or your
opinions.
Instead, in this course, the goal of all
writing assignments is for you to do activities that help you learn the
history of our nation. One of the most powerful ways to learn
something is to try to teach it.
You will succeed in these assignments if you do
these things:
·
If you
read carefully and work to understand what happened and ask if you need help.
·
If you
figure out what essential facts that you would teach your cousin.
·
If you
figure how you could organize those facts as simply and as accurately as you
can.
·
If you
write in a common sense way as though you are teaching your cousin history that
he or she needs to understand.
As with most things in this course, you can reach most
things in two ways so you choose the method that works best for you. With
essays, you can find the possible topics:
·
At the top section of the webpage for
each Unit (a link called Everything You Need for This Unit)
·
Essay
Topics (from the left-hand menu)
For essay exams, use the link at the top of each Unit webpage (at the top
of the unit). It lists all the possible questions so you know what to read. If
you can’t find information, you can email me and I will add to the list some
tips that everyone can see.
For general success, use these resources:
·
In
the course--the Unit webpage, including things to help you self-test in
history.
·
In
the discussion for the Units—ask for the help you need.
·
With
your prof—if you post asking for help and no student responds in a few days,
then I can offer content and make it visible to everyone.
You
can see an example and PowerPoint movie of practical tips on how to read for
evidence. It also offers a PowerPoint movie on why taking notes does NOT
work for learning stuff quickly and well.
The link is http://www.cjbibus.com/1301_1302_Method_to_Read_Understand_Write_Fast.htm
The course includes a Practice Essay so that students find
out the typical requirements for a factual essay without getting their grade
average (or their futures) messed up:
1.
You prepare and do the Practice Essay.
2.
Your instructor gives you feedback on
that essay and tells you the essay grade for the Practice Essay AND for any
future essays if you do the work in same way.
3.
You follow the instructions in that
feedback--an
4.
What happens next depends on what you
did:
·
If you found the problems the
instructor pointed out, she replies back saying she will enter the points for
the essay itself AND the extra credit.
The points for the extra credit cause Blackboard to display the Unit 1 essays
to you.
·
If you did not, she may do several
possible things such as:
- Read her response and then reply back
- Have a phone or face-to-face meeting
READING
FOR EVIDENCE: RELIABLE SOURCES
READING FOR EVIDENCE: FACTUAL ACCURACY
Why
this emphasis on factual accuracy?
If
history is not factually accurate, it is useless—and dangerous.
Being
factually accurate is a good life skill (not just for history). In real life,
no one will pay you for copying words passively. No boss will reward you for
being wrong about how something works.
WRITING WITH EVIDENCE: NOT COPYING
Why
this emphasis on not copying words?
If history is not factually accurate, it is useless—and
dangerous.
Being factually accurate is a good life skill (not just for history).
In real life, no one will pay you for copying words passively. No boss will
reward you for being wrong about how something works.
Two reasons:
1.
When a student plagiarizes, he or she
has handed the professor the evidence to use in any way the professor wants. If
you do not use the required quotation marks (“”) around an author’s words, you
are saying you wrote those words.
I want for you to know what you are doing—not to hurt you but to keep you from
being hurt.
FYI: If you want to quote a lot, I am OK with that. If you use the “”
accurately and if the quotations you chose reveal that you understand well, I
am fine.
2.
Students who plagiarize never
understand the history. They are only faking out themselves.
Writing simply in your own words is a good life skill (not
just for history). In real life, no one will pay you for copying words
passively.
Reliable sources matter for good thinking, and this history
textbook is honorable and reliable.
I started using the textbook for grading because I do not
want to grade on politics. Your politics and your beliefs are your business, not
mine. On the other hand, your evidence for what you say about history is not just my business but my
responsibility to help you.
I kept grading using the textbook because I discovered that
I can usually tell how you are
working and frequently it is how
students are working that keeps them from being successful. To use a military
metaphor, how you fight is how you trained. If you want to be able
to do successful in the future, you need to train yourself now and to choose
habits that fit the future you want.
I also found that a single short essay—the Practice Essay
(History Changes Essay)—meant I could make it where you could see for yourself how you were actually working.
Here’s the Section from the Syllabus
Practice Essay (History Changes
Essay) The Practice Essay introduces you
to essential content for your understanding of United States History. With this
essay, I provide a table to help you see how events changed and I list the
specific pages for you to read for each possible question. I provide an
overview and you are encouraged to ask questions about the content in class.
I provide a link in the top section of the Unit 1 webpage that lists all
possible questions and how to find what to read for each one. The version of
the test you receive determines which question you must answer. |
Here’s the Information Right above
the Practice Essay at Quizzes & Exams
The practice essay opens at 12:00
am on the first day shown above and closes at 11:59 pm on the last day. You
have 25 minutes to answer the question displayed by Blackboard. This is a
practice essay that is required to see any of the Unit essays, but it also
lets you earn full points as extra credit. Maximum word length is 175 words. It’s practice—and it cannot hurt your grade. For more about the extra credit,
see your syllabus. For the possible essay questions that Blackboard may
display and for the required readings for each of those questions, click on
Essay Topics (on the left menu). You can also find this information in the
1st link in the Unit 1 learning module. You also can ask questions about this
work in the Unit 1 Ask and Answer discussion topic. Requires a password because you
can take it ONLY one time. The password is: onetimeonly
|
By completing the
instructions for the 10-point Practice Essay, you can earn 10 points extra
credit. |
The additional
benefits are that:
|
The submission of a
paper with words from an author without quotation
marks can be the professor's evidence that
you plagiarized. Some may not notice, but some may call it plagiarism. Some
professors may label your work as “half-copy” plagiarism (term from The Bedford Handbook, page 692) if you:
·
Either copy an author’s phrases without
quotation marks (“”)
·
Or use the author’s sentence and just
swap a few words with what you think are synonyms
Caution: If you think saying the name
of the source means you can copy another’s words without quotations marks, look
at this table.
What are the rules for citation and use
of quotation marks? The rules vary depending upon whether you are writing:
·
A fact from the source in your own
words
·
A fact in the author’s words (you are
quoting):
What Kind of Fact Are You Using |
Do You Need Citation (Page # etc.)? |
Do You Need Quotation Marks (“”)? |
A fact in your own words |
Yes—although I do not require that in the Blackboard’s
tiny box for essays |
No |
A fact in the author’s words |
Yes |
Yes |
If you are confused
about this, look at these examples.
What the Author Wrote |
What Words You Want to Write |
Do You Need Quotation Marks (“”)? and Why |
the Mississippi
River |
the Mississippi
River |
No – Proper nouns
belong to all of us. |
the green, roaring
river |
the river |
No – Common nouns
belong to all of us. |
the green, roaring
Mississippi River |
the roaring
Mississippi River |
Yes <Notice this. – These are the
author’s unique string of words so you identify them as not your creation with a a pair of quotation marks (“”) at the beginning and
ending of the author’s words. You write: Trade was harder
because of the “roaring Mississippi River.” |
|
roaring |
Yes <Notice this. – This is the
author’s labeling of a condition and it is easier to use the author’s words
with the pair of quotation marks (“”). You write: The author
explained that the “roaring” river made trade more difficult. |
The rules for showing what you have
taken out (…) of the author’s words or put in ([ ]) are complex and for most of
us they are not worth learning.
This trick lets you be accurate but
avoid learning those rules:
1.
Click reply on the message (and do plan what you want to do before you do
that).
2.
Look at the edit box--on the left it shows 3 small buttons T T T (for bold, italic, and underline).
3.
Look at the edit box on the same line but far right. You see a small
button showing 2 downward pointing Vs or arrows or
whatever you want to call them. It is a very common symbol for MORE
stuff available by clicking here
4.
Click on that the small button for MORE.
5. Notice
on the left it NOW shows 4 small buttons T T T T (for bold, italic,
underline, and strike through). It also shows a LOT of other types
of buttons.
With
thanks to WCJC’s Director of Distance Education, Professor Michele Betancourt,
for her permission to use her Getting Started documents (including her exact
words) in the Getting Started sections of our WCJC courses. |
Copyright C. J.
Bibus, Ed.D. 2003-2013 |
WCJC Department: |
History – Dr. Bibus |
Contact Information: |
281.239.1577 or bibusc@wcjc.edu
|
Last Updated: |
2013 |
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