Tour of Everything You
Need to Know about Essays and Evidence in This Course
This
course and its requirements for essays can make your life easier—if you know
what is here to help you. This
tour is meant to substitute for my talking to you and show you what I would
point to if we were sitting next to you: I.
Basic Questions and Answers IV.
How Essays Work in This Course – A repeat of the information in the Tour of a
Learning Module You
can move at your own pace and use what helps you. If you have questions, just
ask. |
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Question |
Brief Answer |
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What is the goal of
writing in the course? |
You are
not writing a summary. You are doing writing that helps you learn the history of our nation by
trying to teach it in a common
sense way. |
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How do
the essays work? |
You know
all of the possible essays and any required readings at the beginning of the
course. Blackboard randomly determines which questions you are asked. The
Tour of a Learning Module covers that. It is repeated below. |
See
below |
Are
there any specific sources? |
Required textbook as
the only source of facts when you
write. Only additional resources: Dallas TeleLearning
Videos and resources built in the course. No use of any other Internet sites. |
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How does
the instructor grade? |
How the side-by-side
placement of the textbook (opened to the content for the question) and your essay
and the rubric lets me see your work and give you realistic and verifiable
feedback. |
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Is there
a rubric used in grading? |
A
weighted rubric: ·
60%
Reading for Evidence ·
30%
Writing with Evidence ·
5%
Following instructions ·
5%
Mechanics such as grammar and punctuation For the
25 point essays, Reading for
Evidence is worth 15 (60% of 25); Writing with Evidence, 7.5 (30%); and both Following Instructions and
Mechanics, 1.25 each 5%). In other words, evidence and reading and writing
are what determine your grade. |
Click
here for the weights shown with the 10 point essay |
Can the
rubric give specific feedback? |
Example
of the rubric used to show detailed feedback specific to you by using
highlighting and underlining |
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Are
there details to explain the rubric? |
5
requirements for evidence measured in the rubric with links to a brief
explanation (See More) and to tips (See How
to Work). |
Click here for III. |
Are
there any aids for students? |
The
Practice Essay at 10 points and with an optional extra credit of 10 points |
Click here for Heading II. |
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5
Requirements for evidence includes tips (See How to Work) |
Click here for Heading III. |
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Displayable
pages from The Bedford Handbook,
the standards manual chosen by WCJC, if you have any question about whether
the Requirements follow those standards |
Visible in
Blackboard on request |
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Mentoring
or coaching by the instructor if you have questions about your work or about
the Requirements – Glad to help. |
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Question |
Brief Answer |
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How is
the practice essay used as an aid for students |
The
Practice Essay at 10 points and with an optional extra credit of 10 points –
You can: ·
Tell
how your instructor grades ·
If
you choose to do the extra credit, earn 10 extra points while identify how you work and whether how
you work might be something you
want to choose to change |
Click
here for the section from the syllabus |
Why does
the instructor grade in the way she does? |
Why does the
instructor grade this way? – It was an accidental
discovery that: ·
I
could easily see how you were working with a source ·
You
could see how you were working for yourself |
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What are
the two choices you have in response to the instructor’s feedback |
You can: EITHER give a specific
reply and not do the extra credit activity OR do the extra credit |
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If you
choose to do the 10-point extra credit, what do you do? |
You do not rewrite, you do not edit, and you do not make any corrections to what you wrote. Instead,
1) you copy what you submitted for the Practice Essay and 2) then you either underline your own
words (like this) or strike through your own words (like |
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Details
to help you understand your decision - highlighting and underlining |
Example of
the rubric used with the Practice Essay to show detailed feedback specific to
you by using highlighting and underlining |
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- weighting of the rubric and the grade for the practice essay |
A
weighted rubric: ·
60%
Reading for Evidence (6 out of 10
points) ·
30%
Writing with Evidence (3 out of 10
points) ·
5%
Following instructions (.5 out of 10 points) ·
5%
Mechanics such as grammar and punctuation (.5 out of 10 points) Reading for Evidence and Writing with Evidence are what determine the
grade. |
Click
here for the weights shown with the 10 point essay |
If my
way of working is not helping me, are there alternative ways that might work
for me? |
5
requirements for evidence measured in the rubric with links to a brief
explanation (See More) and to tips (See How
to Work). I am
also glad to do mentoring or coaching if you have questions about your work
or about the Requirements – Glad to
help. |
Click here for Heading III. |
These
requirements apply to this course and to many jobs
that pay well. The links in the How to Work column were built because a student
who was active in sports told me “You are telling me what I did wrong, but not
how to hold the racket.” His statement was great feedback and a great
suggestion on what I could add to help students. I started talking him through
how I held “the racket” for each of these requirements and that became the
basis for the links in the right column. They are written in the form of a
checklist. The word checklist means a list of steps or things necessary for success
(such as a pilot’s checklist for takeoff or a tennis player’s set of skills).
What Are the 5 Requirements in Brief |
See More |
See How to Work |
1. Must
use reliable sources for facts (evidence)—only the textbook chosen by the History Department and the
sources provided at our Course Website. Do not
assume about facts. |
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2. Must
not copy the author’s phrases without quotation marks and must not copy the
author’s sentence structure and just replace a few words. (The Bedford Handbook defines both as
“half-copy” plagiarism.) |
Click
here and why I make a big deal about this. |
Click
here for how to work (Contains
how to work for both Number 2 and 3 because the solution for How to Work for each is the same.) |
3. Must
not change an author’s words without revealing the changes, especially
changes that might mislead your reader about the evidence. |
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4. Must
use a reliable source to confirm the accuracy of anything you write. Do not
cherry pick your facts or embellish them. If you cannot verify a fact, do not write it. |
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5. Must
know exactly where you found every fact you use. Do not assume the author
agrees with you and just didn’t say it. If a reasonable person using a reliable
dictionary and reading the entire passage would not agree that you have
evidence for what you say, then neither will I. |
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What You See As You Take the Tour |
Hear It |
See It |
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Z6 |
6 |
If you
click on the link for possible essays for the exam that ends the Unit, what
do you see in the general information at the top? |
How
to prepare for objective and essay exams |
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Z7 |
6 |
If you click on the link for possible essays
for the exam that ends the Unit, what do you see in the specific information for
the possible topics for each question? You
know at the beginning of the Unit every possible essay question for the end
of the Unit at the exam—and where to read. |
Copyright C. J.
Bibus, Ed.D. 2003-2013 |
WCJC Department: |
History – Dr. Bibus |
Contact Information: |
281.239.1577 or bibusc@wcjc.edu
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Last Updated: |
2013 |
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